Grammar Check: "Barbed Wire Was Invented in Illinois It Quickly Became Popular..."

The sentence "Barbed wire was invented in Illinois it quickly became popular all over the US" is a run-on sentence (specifically, a fused sentence)—not a fragment.

Why It's a Run-On

It joins two independent clauses with no punctuation or conjunction:

  1. "Barbed wire was invented in Illinois" (subject: barbed wire; verb: was invented)
  2. "It quickly became popular all over the US" (subject: it; verb: became)
Both clauses can stand alone as complete sentences. Splicing them together without a period, semicolon, comma + conjunction, or subordinating conjunction creates a run-on.

How to Fix It

Option 1 (Period): "Barbed wire was invented in Illinois. It quickly became popular all over the US."
Option 2 (Semicolon): "Barbed wire was invented in Illinois; it quickly became popular all over the US."
Option 3 (Comma + conjunction): "Barbed wire was invented in Illinois, and it quickly became popular all over the US."
Option 4 (Subordination): "After barbed wire was invented in Illinois, it quickly became popular all over the US."

Not a Fragment

A fragment lacks a subject or verb (e.g., "Invented in Illinois." or "Barbed wire in Illinois."). This sentence has two subjects and two verbs—the problem is too much sentence, not too little.

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